I personally think to myself that I don't find any mistakes in this drawing, after having checked it so many times. Double checking is important, I think, since it can enhance your vision of things.
Just like a quote I read from a book.
"Train your eyes, like how a musician train his ears."
Well, this just be part of my Visual Diary and training. So giving some thoughts and critics on my own works shouldn't be a problem.
Self-criticizing, huh. But it's important.
I'm not ready yet, I still have to comprehend the theory of coloring and inking.
:o First time seeing Nothing...-chan drawing something resembling the ecchi theme. Me gusta ಠ౪ಠ
ReplyDeleteWell, a little CnC since I commented anyway (￣ー￣ )
Let's see... Overall, very well done. Big improvement from the first image you scanned for us to now :"D The breast area for the girl on the right seems a little off. If me eyes not deceive me, the right breast looks flatter than it should be and disproportional to the left breast. I know it's from an angle, but it still looks disturbing...
Then we get to the knees and calf areas. To me, you narrowed the legs too much. It makes the knee to ankle too thin. Extremely evident with the left leg for the left girl.
Now the feet. Not sure if it was because of the lack of detail, but they look too bent. Right leg for left girl and left leg for right girl. You were probably better off keeping them straight instead.
Oh, also, that thumb for the right hand of the right girl. It should be closer to the rest of the hand. wouldn't have thought of it being a thumb at that distance :x
That'll be it for a CnC of a non artist such as I. Feel free to comment on it :3
Heh heh, thank you very much for the CnC, Ryu. This is actually not my first time drawing something ecchi though. :p
DeleteI was surely thinking there were mistakes in this pictures, but now you mentioned them. To tell the truth, I was honestly confused by figuring which left is and which right is, after reading your comment. But now, I think I figured it little by little. It would probably be much easier if I gave them name.
Probably as an experience, I will keep this picture as it be although I've mostly repaired the original picture.
And I will keep what you said in my mind, and keep practicing. :3