A follow-up 2

Another follow-up from doujinshi Light Novel "Reisei". This drawing sure takes my time a lot :/ as actions are the most hardest thing one would ever draw. For first panel, it is supposed to be a teacher going after the boy. This is where I thought an effect is needed mostly, in order to give an impression of 'running'. But without appropriate equipment, it doesn't look like one, yeah?

Now onto second panel, this really needs no effects as the boy jumped from a building to another. However this one is what troubles me most, making me having to erase the pose and re-draw it over and over until I got the most appropriate one. I forgot how many times I have done it precisely. Drawing the back of characters are much less hard than drawing the jumping pose though.

Then, third panel, the easiest of all to draw. Nuff said. :o

Edit :

Allow me to put one page again, this one has been edited up to detail though.

I added a mountain, a tree, some windows, and two fences. Nothing looks wrong, I think, except the lines which look untidy due to this scanner. (屮ﾟДﾟ)屮

I think I will have to change this scanner....